2010-01-22

Victim of Love’s feedback

Filed under: Writing — D. Moonfire @ 19:58

This week has turned into a complete cluster, but a few deep breaths and I think I’m getting through it. One of the bright points was the writing group last night (yeah, had a busy day).

Plus, I got honorable mention in a contest.

We got to my story, Victim of Love, as part of our schedule. I was honestly expected a new asshole, mainly because I don’t think I’m a good writer, but it was surprisingly positive feedback. And relatively little negative. The rewrites and corrections apparently made it a much more enjoyable story. I got some really good suggestions on making it smoother, tying in some background, and fixing some rough points.

Overall, I thought it was very productive and very helpful.

I should have it ready for submissions in a week or so. Though, it comes in at 4k words, which is a bit long for comedy/horror calls for submissions I’ve seen.

We also didn’t have anything new for next week, so I volunteered to do another. It will either be chapter one of Flight of the Scions or another fantasy comedy, Best of Enemies. I also have that commission I have to work on which is due in two weeks.

I also need to seriously tweak the PDF generator. I miss my 12pt Courier. And maybe create an index for the writing group in a supersekrit place. Oh well, it should be a rather busy weekend.

As for the contest, Boing Boing had a contest to win an Envy 15 laptop. Cute little thing that would be perfect for replacing my dying one. I didn’t win, but I did get honorable mention for my attempt to rewrite a scene from Peter Pan in a noir POV.

2 Responses to “Victim of Love’s feedback”

  1. I’m glad you enjoyed the critique.

    We all think we suck, until someone tells us we do, then we get offended.

    It’s nice to have some fresh blood in the group.

  2. D. Moonfire says:

    I don’t get offended. Not entirely sure if I could get offended. A bit hurt on occasion, but that fades like bee stings.

    I like to know where my writing stands, without the cruxification, glossing over or kiss-assing that I usually find from friends and family. I love honest answers, be it that someone likes it or that they hate it. It makes it easier to get that when people aren’t emotionally attached to you.

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