Just finished the second round of editing Muddy Reflections! I ended up adding three more chapters just to make it run more smoothly, four if you include the appendix. I also modified the chapters so each one starts with a time, date, and location, just to help give some consistency and to handle the fact the story is spread out over six years.
Overall, I'm very, very happy.
On the other hand, I'm beginning to not like Adobe CS2 products. They are slick and smooth, but I hate product activation features and programs that call home. I know its to prevent stealing of software, but after the troubles we had with iTunes, do I really need to go through this again when Fluffy's iMac decides to self-destruct and I have to reinstall everything again, then have to explain to Adobe why we installed a program three times?