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- 2017-07-25 Maximum Velocity, Using Talents, Times, and Second-Hand Dresses 9 - This short chapter is there to show the passage of time because I really dislike montages in writing. Actually, I don't like them much of anywhere. However, I wanted to show that she is moving forward with Nirih's dress, which is a "backbone" of the tension in this novel.
- 2017-07-18 Adultery, Boys Will Not Be Boys, and Second-Hand Dresses 8 - Since this is a short, steamy little scene between Lily and Hasan, it is a good time to talk about Hasan being a married to Mindil while kissing Lily. I like this scene because it shows that Hasan has poor control over Lily when it comes to his passion and Lily is no less than receptive of them for her own reasons. It is also intimate and personal, something that both crave at this moment.
- 2017-07-17 Changes to MfGames Culture - In the process of updating my website, I ended up doing significant amount of work on my arbitrary culture library, mfgames-culture.
- 2017-07-16 Fedran Website Improvements - Over the last week, I've focused on improving the Fedran website. This took a fair amount of work but there is a lot more content and easier navigation as a result.
- 2017-07-11 Creative Blocks, High Society Superstitions, Finding Love, and Second-Hand Dresses 7 - This week, Kendrick comes back and interrupts Lily. I also write a little bit about creative/writer's block, romance in restrictive societies, and the bad luck of having a failed duel means to a young woman.
- 2017-07-05 Origins, Hasan, Second-Hand Dresses 6, Spoilers, The Choice, and One More - This week introduces our second love interest for the novel, Hasan. Lily's life gets more complicated as the two men who were responsible for her not being chosen for a wife have come back into her life, months before she officially becomes a kudame.
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