Poem - Spin, Drop, Slice
On the third day of National Poetry Month, I have a littlie poem about martial practice. When I was into iaijutsu, it was peaceful doing the various katas with the sword. I never got really good at them, my ego and focus wasn't there, but I still enjoyed it greatly. Except for, you know, when I sliced open my hand on my sword.
Spin, Drop, Slice
step forward
no, that lets me vulnerable
exposed on the side
open in the front and back
think, damn you, pretend
spear danced on my palms
a wide circle of death
no, too high
bring it down
they can strike low
come around, drop it down
bring the blade up from the right
only graze the ground
too slow
not real enough
two hands on the sweaty haft
ready to strike
slash hard and fast
aim for the imaginary throat
victory
My “natural” type of poetry is free verse but the stanzas have a tendency to have the patterns and limitations. In this case, I wrote an interspersed set of stanzas going from four lines to one with the second set in an opposite direction.
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